Technological and scientific advances are changing the food people eat. Some believe that these are changes can be harmful to the health of the people. Others challenge this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds in all fields especially in the food industry. These days, people consume meat has changed for the

last

two decades due to advancements in science and technology.

However

, some believe that

this

transformation is affected to well-being but others think that

this

is a good one.

this

essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

To begin

with, there are a plethora of detrimental effects of changing food habits nowadays.

This

trend can lead to getting so many diseases

such

as heart problems, obesity and diabetes.

For example

, according to the world health organisation said that

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transferring the meat habit is the single reason for so many diseases bring and

this

ill ratio has been increasing dramatically as compared past days because those period people had eaten only healthy bread due to the technology and science did not find

hence

, they can survive long-lasting even more than 100 years but now

this

is impossible one.

Conversely

, some pessimistic folks say that

this

kind of improvement is a good thing because

this

innovation can get more benefits among the population

such

as preserved bread by using the fridge.

For example

, nowadays we have more hybrid plants

consequently

, we can protect and preserve endangered plants variety

such

as hybrid brinjal is famous among the market. To be more precise,

this

idea will obtain more yield in the agricultural sector

therefore

, some believe

this

is good creativity as compared to old period equipment and machinery related to cuisines. To conclude, certainly, these kinds of changes is provided so many illnesses to the population due to using a plethora of chemicals but some pessimistic person believes that

this

development is a good thing.

However

, in my opinion about

this

, cuisines changing is provided with the detrimental and harsh effects to the population

hence

, we should get more awareness about

this

in order so we can save our life.

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