Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

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worldwide issue and

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the past decade, the percentage of

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is increased significantly.

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the reasons

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the

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and how to limit the increase of the

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rate

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. The reasons behind the illegal activities are countless and in

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the essay will show some of them.

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reason is

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poverty

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support the idea that the relation between

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crime

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and

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is positive relation which means that when the

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rate

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increased the

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rate

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is increased

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. Another reason is peer pressure.

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pressure

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individual activity, so

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bad company he definitely going to change his activity to fit with them. The

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reason is

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of drugs. The use of illegal drugs definitely leads to illegal activities ,

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as stealing and killing.

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, there are many solutions to limit the

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rate

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solution for the

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is that the

governments

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should prevent

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poverty

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by providing more education facilities and aid to the

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who under the

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line. The more

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get education and support from the

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the

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rate

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will

decreased

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. Another solution is that the

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should put

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sever

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punishments on anyone that do a

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the punished is the low of

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do the

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. To sum up, the

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and illegal activities

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rase a lot in the

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years, the probable reasons for the

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are

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, peer pressure effect, and use of drugs. While

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the likely

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to it

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governments

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aid for the plover

people

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and the severe punishments from the

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.