Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Schools
divided into several types and two of them is
private
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a private
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school
and public
school
. Some people claim that paying taxes is not necessary for
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a pupil
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pupil
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pupils
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in private
schools
and they believe they are paying for government tuition.
However
, I do not agree that they pay tax for
state
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the state
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education system they pay tax in private
school
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schools
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. Due to the tax in luxury
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schools
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school
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their thoughts are not truthful and not correct . What
i
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mean by
this
is that people try to avoid
paymant
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payment
of taxes and requirements, cause of
this
is studying at
this
kind of
schools
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that demand
huge
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a huge
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amount of money and
this
is not a secret.
For example
, if we compare study at public
school
and private we can find one big minus in private education system is money. For
this
reason
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we can understand that private
school
is not cool as we think.
On the other hand
, we cannot leave
this
without
discussion
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a discussion
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about plusses in private
school
.
Firstly
, we
shoud
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should
mention that studying at luxury
schools
is much better because teachers earn much more in personal
schools
than in the public for
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all the teachers have good
qualification
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qualifications
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and
diplopas
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diplomas
at private
school
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schools
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. For
instanse
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instance
, all the teachers want to give ideal and wide knowledge and
also
earn for
this
reasons
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if they are clever they search private
schools
or learning
centers
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. For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that
techers
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teachers
come to public
schools
without
desire
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the desire
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to earn and will teach with enthusiasm.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tax exemption
  • public education
  • private schools
  • collective responsibility
  • societal welfare
  • equitable access
  • financial burden
  • social cohesion
  • tax credits
  • vouchers
  • subsidies
  • state-funded
  • socioeconomic disparities
  • public vs. private sector
  • quality of education
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