In some countries, more and more people becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are reasons for this? How can people research this?

Recently, a variety of nations have occurred a phenomenon that
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have been keen on detecting the past of their accommodation. In
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I will show the reason for
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tendency. I contend that trend has 3 main reasons.
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, the possessor wants to increase the value of their accommodation by finding the history of the place they are living. If the
house
or flat has famous celebrities or someone who has had influence in the past, it will gain the valuation of their home.
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, imagine that William Shakespeare had lived there and had
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one of his famous stories, so It is
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from people who want to buy your
house
. As I think they should go to the council to see when the
house
was built and
then
they can search the Internet for more information.
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, another part of people who believe in spirituality that can affect their own wellbeing placements of furniture and decorations
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can result in an imbalance of invisible energy forces. They will meet the predecessor or priest to get the prediction about who used to live in the
house
before and they ask for receiving some kind of amulet to protect
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or their family from the evil spirits. In conclusion, as
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become interested in the history of their
house
because of valuations and superstitious reasons, they can easily acquire the necessary data by talking to others or surfing the internet. It is advisable that all residents follow
this
practice to prevent any potential threats.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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