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Some people today believe that it is acceptable to use physical force to discipline children, but others feel it is completely unacceptable. Discuss this view and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, it is the fact that youths are essential national resources,
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are crucial. Many
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 that using corporeal violence to educate children is decent.
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 before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand, using physical force can yield up children’s discipline in various fields. Because of its function, kids will bear in mind that what they should avoid so as not to be punished. To elaborate, some bad manners like rude, rowdy or sluggish can be coped with using some concrete strength. Some great example is found in various old Thai’s educational systems which had
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thought that the more hitting students get, the better habits students gain.
On the other hand
, the aforementioned method dealing with adolescent’s awful actions can make many negative feedbacks. They will have
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 in their brain which is power and force can control everything in their life. Not only invalid thinking they will get, but
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 a lot of wounds happened. There are still many ways for modifying and correcting the poor styles in each kid as giving them the right perspective, talking with proper reason, being the role models and so on. The following processes can
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using violence to improve minors’ actions.
Although
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the use of cruelty.
Therefore
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