Many people think that youth should encourage to choose to have a stable job rather than choice over their passion.

Many
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think that youth should encourage to choose to have a stable
job
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rather than choice over their
passion
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. In my opinion, young
people
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should give an opportunity to follow their passionate work than a realistic one. Most of the parents these days encourage their children to have a stable income
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instead
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of allowing them to follow their
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means that they are trying to influence or making decisions for their children
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of letting them select their own carrier.
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, in Myanmar, most parents pursuit their children to work as government public officers
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of supporting their interest jobs.
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, many young
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are complaining about working in an environment that they are not comfortable and there has no motivation at work for their career enhancements.
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, the young
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are still having long runway and having a failed occupation in the early stage of life-giving them an opportunity to learn to be more realistic and mature.
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, youth can try to follow their interest to become a singer, actors or dancers and it may result to have a positive outcome. And if failed, they still have enough time to change to a new career at their middle age of life and there has no regret because they have tried their best on the
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that they passionate about.
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, youths are inspired to try to choose their future
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based on their
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. In conclusion, young
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should be allowed to make their own decisions to choose for their future jobs depends on their
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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