Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

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crime analyses are becoming high all over the world. Unfortunately, the problem is getting worse and worse for the population and effective negatively , so it’s important to take the action to resolve

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problems and

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and solutions . One of the main causes of the problem is that poverty spread and homeless, by

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I mean, if these

people

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don’t have any income to meet their major needs, they are going to steal no matter of the consequences.

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, a lot of

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living under the poverty line so they can’t reach the normal things

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example, meals, houses, clothes and

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lifestyle. The solution is for the government to provide these

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facility that will help them to live a good life

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as houses, food and healthcare.

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role

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to support them to work as the results that will impact positively

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their criminal

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. Another important cause is that the weakness of safety and security policies, at the end of the day if the penalty and punishment are not strictly from the government ,

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society wouldn’t worry about the rules. What I really mean to

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that will

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on their mindset about

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an infraction

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of the laws

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instance, many offenders killing

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and disperse themselves because they know that will not investigate properly and the police can’t catch them and

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the criminal file will be closed after

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of period. One of the powerful solutions

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is implementing clear Policies and investigation

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to let

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aware

about

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their

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.

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, the rate of hidden

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criminals

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will be downsized. In conclusion, the criminal activities rate will be reduced if the government and society take their role

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solving

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the problems and protecting our life.