Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is widely
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believed
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that
language
is a huge problem for
people
who live or plan to move abroad,
thus
, it could be
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the reason
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why
people
prefer to stay in their country of origin. I hold the view that
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language
barier
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barrier
is a huge problem,
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it is possible to avoid
such
social
problems
.
Firstly
, research
suggest
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that
people
who move abroad have a fear of
language
,
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when they can not spell words correctly or might not
undrestand
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understand
the answers
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their questions. Due to these reasons, they just stop
to talk
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with native speakers and commence to lose their social contacts, which can lead to
lonelyness
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loneliness
and might be
problems
with
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established
extablished
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the extablished
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law of
this
country.
For instance
, if a person lived in a city where it was
neccesary
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necessary
to sort
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garbage and
then
moved to the country where it is one of the important rules, but did not aware
about
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that due to lack
knowledge
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of knowledge
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of
language
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the language
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, it could be
serious
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a serious
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issue for
this
person.
However
,
people
abroad try to pass their time at home, and they do not haunt new contacts.
Hence
there is a reason why they have
a social
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social problems
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problems
.
For example
,
people
who lived in isolation, in the
furure
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future
have a lot of
problems
in
converstion
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conversation
with others.
In addition
, the part of
brain
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the brain
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which is responsible for speech begins to decline. To conclude, it is tough to speak in
international
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an international
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language
,
thus
it can lead to mental and social
problems
.
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,
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it is possible to avoid these issues by
strong
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a strong
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passion to learn
new
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a new
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language
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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