Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What are the reasons for this and how can the problem be tackled?

Health is an important aspect for any individual across the globe, which is very well proved in

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recent pandemic.

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of technical advancements taken place in the healthcare industry, the majority of people are falling sick due to illnesses. In

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essay, I will list out 2 important reasons for these physical health issues and the possible solutions to handle them. The primary reasons identified behind

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of

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intake and

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of physical and mental

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by the public. To be more precise,

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the quality

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of

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intake is deteriorating

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due to heavy consumption of junk

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. The city of

Ohklahoma

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Oklahoma

has recorded

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obesity patients during the fiscal

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2018 and 2019 because of the degraded

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served by the street vendors. Adding to

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, due to the

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lifestyle of the city population, focus on physical and mental exercise has vanished. The calories accumulated versus burn ratio are increasing across the globe as per the WHO statistics released during

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pandemic, which is a clear sign of no

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activities. Prevention is better than cure. To achieve

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, despite

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enhancing the world-class healthcare systems to cure a medical issue, it is better to follow some

pecautionary

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precautionary

steps to avoid problem

occurance

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occurrence

. The government has to pass strict policies to stop the marketing of junk

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by the respective manufacturers to reduce impact to a greater extent. The Mc Donalds advertisement on pizza and burger

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, is the most attractive

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to pull children to taste them during their outings. Apart from

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, social awareness campaign on physical and mental well beings is the

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important

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criteria

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to eradicate these issues from the root level. To conclude, irrespective of enhanced developments in the medical industry, the majority of people are suffering from diseases. While, there are substantial causes behind these situations like degraded

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and lack of workout, possible solutions to suppress them are

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available and are being slowly implemented by the governments as discussed in the above paragraph for

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well being.