Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal,some people,however,think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many public institutions argue that economic development is their principal goal, other,
however
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of other fields should have the same weight
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economic progress. On the one hand, economic expansion
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an important objective for governments. In fact,
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sector, people are able to increase their saves and to live a quiet life. In
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addiction
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, the general wealth of the state will raise
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to the lowering of the
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unemployment
rate and the sense of belonging will spread among the citizens.
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,
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economic research made by "Il sole 24 ore" an
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newspaper showed that the richest countries are even the happiest and with more personal
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satisfaction
.
On the other hand
, many other public fields must be important for the
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political
class.
However
the economic development is important for a country,
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sector may be at the centre of public tasks. In fact, only
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thought
big
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investments
investment
in schools and universities is possible to create workers that are able to permit an economic expansion. High educated
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employees
employers
are essential to manage businesses and to make
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decisions to increase the national GDP.
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, is easy to see that in countries like
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Qatar
or Saudi Arabia even if they have
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sources of natural resources only a small part of the population have a good life while the majority of them are farmers or humble workers because of
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in the educational system. To conclude, while the benefits of economic progress allow people to live a better life,t the creation of an important school system should have the same importance because only
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the enhancement of
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area a country can grow and
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prosper.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
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