Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

These days, the
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is becoming one of the necessary tools
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process. While the use of
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is useful
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learning and searching processes, some people think that the use of
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many negative drawbacks and the
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hours should be limited.
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of the
internet
should be restricted or not on educational proposes and give reasons.
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the beginning, I am totally agreed with the view that the
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learning should be restricted.
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, the fully dependent
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the
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limits the critical thinking of the students and their problem-solving skills.
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students, who fully dependent on the
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, if the teacher gave them a question, they are going to search on the
internet
and solve it without understanding the question. So, that will affect their knowledge level and their critical-thinking level.
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reason is the plagiarism problems. The over-dependent students on
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most of the time
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just copy and paste from other researches and essays from the
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rather than writing by themselves.
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cheating.
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, the schools that do not have plagiarism tools should limit the
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to avoid
this
problem. To conclude, the
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learning
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process is becoming popular
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pandemic.
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my own
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the
internet
has many positives and negatives affect on
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learning process,
thus
the
usage
of the
internet
should be restricted to ensure high educational quality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • independent learning
  • critical thinking
  • excessive reliance
  • hinder
  • crucial
  • problem-solving
  • overly dependent
  • diversity
  • perspectives
  • global cultures
  • enriching
  • unrestricted
  • information overload
  • discerning
  • credible sources
  • incorporation
  • engagement
  • adaptivity
  • personalized learning
  • innovative
  • pedagogy
  • digital age
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