Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? what can employers do to make their life easier?

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Stress

is a big problem in today's

workplace

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easy

will show some

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stress

and will discuss the

stress

to reduce. There are

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plethora

of causes of

stress

in the

workplace

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with,

excessively

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an excessively

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high workload with unrealistic deadlines, makes people feel

pressurized

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, they are given more workload to check their skills and

this

is unfair. One of my friend family

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was working in

macdonalds

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MacDonalds

Macdonalds

and is

manager

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the manager

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there and she was having less staff to work with at that time she was no able to handle things alone because being a

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manger

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the duties are double than the employer in that situation they can get pressurized or get stressed which is not good for mental and physical health. There may be

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of interpersonal support or poor working

realtionship

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relationship

relationships

leading to

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isolation

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stressed

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can be caused due to job security and less pay or might be having

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experience

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with your

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harrasment

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harassment

which can lead

employer

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the employer

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feel

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uncomfortable or

insecurity

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with other workers as well.

Last

but not least, poor working

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environment

like heat cold or noise

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or uncomfortable

uncomfortable

seating may

also

lead to

stress

. Employers can take lots of

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to cope with

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a workplace

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like if they

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their job is giving them workload they

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should

talk to

there

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their

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manager or whoever is the supervisor to give them less

worload

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workload

and provide them a full day off for

thier

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their

health.

thing they should fix

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at least

one day to sit with their

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and discuss

about

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thier

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their

job like what problem they are facing with and should

also

review performance to know what skills they have and

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match

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their

skills to give only that work to reduce

stress

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the employer

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employer

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employers

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should

also

consider how

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hours they need to work and if any

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employee

is sick they should provide

day

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off for

thier

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their

health. To sum up,

stress

at the

workplace

is an issue of

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great

greater

concern. they should take rest to reduce

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their

the

stress

otherwise

the

stress

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their

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efficiency

of working.

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Topic Vocabulary:

comfortable lifestyle
make ends meet
culture of 'presenteeism'
job insecurity
technological advancements
constant connectivity
globalization
irregular work hours
flexible working schedules
work-life balance
employee training and development
productivity
efficiency
healthier work environment
mental health resources

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Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? what can employers do to make their life easier?

Fully explain your ideas

The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.