Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? what can employers do to make their life easier?

Stress
is a big problem in today's
workplace
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easy
will show some
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stress
and will discuss the
stress
to reduce. There are
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plethora
of causes of
stress
in the
workplace
.
To begin
with,
excessively
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an excessively
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high workload with unrealistic deadlines, makes people feel
pressurized
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.
Similarly
, they are given more workload to check their skills and
this
is unfair. One of my friend family
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was working in
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MacDonalds
Macdonalds
and is
manager
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the manager
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there and she was having less staff to work with at that time she was no able to handle things alone because being a
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manger
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the duties are double than the employer in that situation they can get pressurized or get stressed which is not good for mental and physical health. There may be
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of interpersonal support or poor working
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relationship
relationships
leading to
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a sense
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of
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isolation
.
Furthermore
,
stressed
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stress
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can be caused due to job security and less pay or might be having
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a bad
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experience
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experiences
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with your
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like
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harassment
which can lead
employer
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the employer
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feel
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uncomfortable or
insecurity
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with other workers as well.
Last
but not least, poor working
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environment
like heat cold or noise
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or uncomfortable
uncomfortable
seating may
also
lead to
stress
. Employers can take lots of
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to cope with
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a workplace
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like if they
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feel
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their job is giving them workload they
shoukd
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should
talk to
there
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their
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manager or whoever is the supervisor to give them less
worload
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workload
and provide them a full day off for
thier
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their
health.
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thing they should fix
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at least
one day to sit with their
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work
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and discuss
about
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thier
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their
job like what problem they are facing with and should
also
review performance to know what skills they have and
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match
thier
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their
skills to give only that work to reduce
stress
. And
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the employer
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employer
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employers
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should
also
consider how
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hours they need to work and if any
eomloye
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employee
is sick they should provide
day
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a day
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off for
thier
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their
health. To sum up,
stress
at the
workplace
is an issue of
greate
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great
greater
concern. they should take rest to reduce
thier
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their
the
stress
otherwise
the
stress
will reduce
thier
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their
efficency
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efficiency
of working.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comfortable lifestyle
  • make ends meet
  • culture of 'presenteeism'
  • job insecurity
  • technological advancements
  • constant connectivity
  • globalization
  • irregular work hours
  • flexible working schedules
  • work-life balance
  • employee training and development
  • productivity
  • efficiency
  • healthier work environment
  • mental health resources
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