Some developed countries now have unemployment problems. Why do people still want to emigrate to these countries. Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

The trend of shifting to other nations is still popular, even

there

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is a lack of

job

opportunities. Owing to better facilities, residing with family

members

, and interest

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of

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another culture are the reasons

of

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migration. The aforementioned practice is

due to

the availability of better amenities. The reason behind

this

is that people choose to move to that kind of nation, where they can get free and better facilities

such

as education and health.

Consequently

, it will help them to improve their standard of

life

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. A survey

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done by, Cambridge University students in 2018, revealed that 20% of Indians shifted to Canada, not only because of the free education system

of

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their children but

also

for better medical facilities, irrespective of the

job

opportunity.

Besides

good life standards, people want to settle with their loved ones. Many parents or children moved to those countries earlier and became

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permanent

residence

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of that country. Now they would like to reside with their family

members

;

therefore

, family

members

have to migrate to another country, even

no

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if no

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job

is available respective to their fields.

For instance

, had my parents not settled in Australia, I would not

decide

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to migrate to Australia, though I knew, I have to struggle for a

job

.

Moreover

, denizens want to explore different cultures and traditions.

This

is because youngsters are lured by

western

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culture and they always

dreamed

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dream

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of shifting to another nation and

learn

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learning

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about some new culture, languages and rituals, even without thinking of their future career in that nation.

To conclude

, despite unemployment in

few

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a few

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nations, people still want to move there, because of a better lifestyle, permanent settlement with family

members

, and curiosity to learn about some new traditions.