The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree ?

The

first

line graph shows the average

amonunt

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amount

of

the

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money(in pounds) which families dedicated to

physical

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the physical

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activities of their

children

per month in Britain, from 2008 to 2014.

However

, the

second

chart illustrates how many British

children

(in millions) took part in

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football

,

athletics

and swimming

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during

the same interval.

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, it is evident that expenditure of money on

childrne’s

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children's

sport saw a gradual rise throughout the entire period.

Similarly

, the

number

of

children

who

paticipated

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participated

in three various types of sports grew in the same period. It is worth noting that,

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football

accounted for the largest

number

of participants among all three sporty, over the whole period of six

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years

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years

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. In 2008, the average monthly expenditure on

children

’s sport stood at 20. From 2008 to 2014, the

figure

for spending money rose steadily by roughly 12 and reached a peak of 32. With regard to the

second

chart, in 2008,

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number

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of

children

participated

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who participated

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in football was the highest at about 8

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whereas the figures for swimming and

athletics

were considerably lower at approximately 2 and 5, respectively. Between 208 and 2014, the

figure

for football suffered a slight growth of 1

milion

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million

. Turning to

swimming

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and

athletics

, from 2008 to 2011, there was an increase of around 0.5 and 2.5 in the

number

of participated

children

, respectively. In 2011, the

figure

for

athletics

exceeded that of swimming.In the subsequent years, the figures for swimming and

athletics

experienced a moderate rise of about 1.5 and 2.5, in turn. It is worth mentioning that, in 2014, the

number

of

children

who participated in

footbal

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football

was the highest, whereas, the

figure

for

athletics

and swimming were lower at 5 and 4,

respetively

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respectively

.