Nowadays, there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this?
Female
nowadays are given more chances to chase their own careers and passion in Fix the agreement mistake
Females
the
life than those who live in the Correct article usage
apply
last
decades.While this
idea is supported by not only government and citizen
,a part of people still have the option that there are more Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
up-coming
problems Correct your spelling
upcoming
instead
of the solutions
It is worth to say that the female is likely to taking advantage in some field more than male.The propotion
of Correct your spelling
proportion
women
are just be borned
to do housework and taking care of kids is long gone.Ladies Correct your spelling
born
bored
are now be
more patient,intelligent and their speech is as important as the man.In the government,in the case of Change the verb form
are now
United
State-a countries is known as Correct article usage
the United
a
racism in the ways of treating Remove the article
apply
women
which welcomed the first
female vice president- mis
Kamala.In Correct your spelling
is
such
developing
and strong country,a Correct article usage
a developing
women
stands up as an example of the idea Change the noun form
woman
women
is supporting the decision of supporting genders equally.Moreover
,women
have many preciated
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appreciated
characteristic
that the man hardly have Change to a plural noun
characteristics
such
as the carefulness and risk of emotion.Those personalities give the female a huge advance in facing up tremendous
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the tremendous
a tremendous
problem
from any Fix the agreement mistake
problems
fields
.
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field
However
,in my opinion,the
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women
should not be given too much
responsibilities as Change the quantifier
many
man
which can cause more disasters not only for the countries.I agree that Add an article
a man
women
are becoming wilder and more powerfull
day by day.Correct your spelling
powerful
In contrast
,a small number of them can have the strength to put up with all the pressure during their works.Additionally
,putting too much
Change the quantifier
many
emotions
in the works can be their weakness.The emotional actions can lead them to Fix the agreement mistake
emotion
the
terrible decisions especially the Correct article usage
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women
who in charge of important position
In conclusion,my point of view is the one side option.I believe that the
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equallication
is important but the Correct your spelling
equalisation
qualification
equalization
women
should be considered carefully in giving their any chances.Submitted by khuongquynhnga1997 on
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