In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving older railway lines.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Should the government allocate more funds to enhancing the existing

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tracks or invest in building new high-speed

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connecting cities?

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is the most debatable issue.A few

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upgrading older

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while others support constructing new

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tracks.

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, I am of the opinion that investors should be more on improving older

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lines

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.

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essay shall discuss both views and state my opinion. On the one hand, the rationale for constructing new

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is that these are fast ,convenient and comfortable.The travel

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will be short in fast

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and busy people like businessmen and women will be beneficial as the

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can be utilized for doing something more productive.

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, Japan has started bullet

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for its citizens to save commuting

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.

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,it will improve the economy as numerous people would travel in fast

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to avoid traffic congestion apart from saving substantial thing ,the

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.

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, high-speed

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will be beneficial for the public and the economy of the country.

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,people who favour improving the older

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tracks belive that since already they are established and

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, some improvement will make their performance better.

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, some

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lines

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are a decade old and some investment from the government will help in improving their functioning.

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, the funds required will be less as they are already established.

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, older

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tracks are connected to deeper parts of the country like remote areas and suburbs

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, some enhancement will help the common public as they are the one's who regularly use the

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. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that older

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are more efficient and economical and improve the economy of the country .Henceforth, More focus should be on the older

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tracks rather than on the new fast

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