it has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Do the benefits of globalization outweigh the drawbacks?

Due to globalisation,

whole

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world

tend

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to be

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world society.

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would

helps

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to reduce the barrier of commerce and language between the nation.

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tend has more positive aspect rather negative . There are numerous benefits of becoming

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world into

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village.Its help to promote the economy of developing countries.

People

of

third

contries

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countries

,sell and buy their raw products directly in international grain markets and gets hefty profits.

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,Indian

massives

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masses

,now start selling raw cotton in Asian Markets and

gains

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large profits .

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Therefore

,it would

helps

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to promote export and import between the nations and businesses, which could

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the nation to run in

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of success.

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, communication advancement eliminates

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language barrier,now

people

freely express their feelings and thought in other

nation

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.

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,thousands of

people

every year from developing countries

migrates

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to Canada ,in order to live and work.

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helps

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to increase their productivity. One major drawback of

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trend is,entrepreneurs of wealthy nations set up their factories and

bussiness

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business

businesses

in developing countries and start using their natural resources which causes

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of extinction.

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, carbon

emission

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from the factories

also

make

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environment

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worse ,which would increase

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global warming . To conclude,modernisation bringing

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people

close to each other and helps to promote trade markets and job opportunities by eliminating communication

barrier

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,

nevertheless

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it has some negative aspects which couldn't be neglected.