Criminality is growing among children and teenagers. Why is it growing and how should These criminals be treated?
Children
minds are like sponges, Change noun form
Children's
thus
they can easily catch up with everything around them. Currently, crime
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the crime
ration
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ratio
escalate
among Wrong verb form
has escalated
child
and Fix the agreement mistake
children
undergraduate
. There are several reasons for Fix the agreement mistake
undergraduates
such
situation
which Correct article usage
a situation
is
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are
explaining
in the ensuing paragraph with some preventive action against the juvenile offenders. Discussing the reason for Wrong verb form
explained
teenager
criminality, the foremost cause is lack of primary Replace the word
teenage
education
. If an individual cannot get educated then
they do
not aware Verb problem
are
about
law and order against Change preposition
of
crime
and try to misdeed. For example
, as per the last
survey through Indian
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the Indian
government
, 70% juvenile
offender is not educated and not aware of laws. Change preposition
of juvenile
Furthermore
, teenagers are easy convenience to do
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apply
misdeed
byFix the agreement mistake
misdeeds
giving temptation
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tempted
about
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by
the
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apply
money
. Nowadays juvenile
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juveniles
does
Verb problem
commit
crime
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crimes
because
to earn easy Correct word choice
apply
money
through a shortcut like a
chain Correct article usage
apply
snatcher
and pocket Fix the agreement mistake
snatchers
snatcher
. Fix the agreement mistake
snatchers
In addition
, discussing
preventive measures to overcome juvenile Wrong verb form
it discusses
crime
. Government
should start free Correct article usage
The government
education
for child
criminal
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criminals
thus
they get knowledge and develop themself. If teens are educated then
they don’t need to take shortcuts to earn money
which leads to reduce
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reduced
child
criminal rates. Furthermore
,Add an article
the
government
should give special attention to the child
, who is
left by Correct subject-verb agreement
are
parents
; Correct pronoun usage
their parents
authority
should give military training and give proper Correct article usage
the authority
guild-lines
about career development. Correct your spelling
guidelines
For example
, the Indian government
start
a mission to educate criminals on prison, namely “Siksha on Jail”. Wrong verb form
started
To conclude
, In this
developing world , juveniles more intend towards crime
because of the lack of Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
education
and temptation
of Correct article usage
the temptation
money
, which can be mitigated through provide
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by providing
education
to child
criminal
in juvenile jail and Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
give
guidelines for the betterment of their Wrong verb form
giving
carrier
.Correct your spelling
careers
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