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Learning English language in an English speaking country is easy, but not the only methodology. Do you agree or disagree?

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 is important for
people
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 indifferent from what area they are
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 There are different views about the
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 related to
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, it needs to be paid or not. To find the answer
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this
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 question, I think we need to disccusdiscuss a bit about
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 topic. On the one
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hand and
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,
people
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 think that the
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 needs to be shared. The one reason is that it will help the
comunitycommunity
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community community
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 too. The other reason is that
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 it will create the conditions for
people
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 to be prepared for different situations and to be
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able able
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, if I will know about some
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relevant relevant
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 I will be competent to provide better legal assistance in
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the economic
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another
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believes
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 that important things are valuable, and it is no reason to share them
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 free. NowedaysNowadays, everything
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 money, so, the
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need
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 to be paid
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legal advice is
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, because ba Lawyer
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taught
tough
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 getting the legal
profficiencyproficiency
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proficiency proficiency
, and it is not fear to share the
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 freely.
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 that, what comes free is not respected, so if somebody needs an answer
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 their curiosity, they need to invest in it. In conclusion, I believe that
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 informed make you stronger, but nothing needs to be expected without charge,
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,
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 is precious. In the end, I still
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people
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 to share the basic
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information information
 between them to improve the better life and professionals conditions.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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