In most successful organizations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers are the most important factor, other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The relationship

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between

managers

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and employees has changed

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because in the 20th

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of them do not have

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a conservative

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approach at

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workplace

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. It is

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by some individuals , that as communication among

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and working people

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predominant

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a predominant

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aspect , while some masses deem , that there are some other factors which should definitely take under consideration .

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essay will probe

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sides of

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debate

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and draws a logical conclusion in the end. To commence with, being in

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relationship has proven beneficial for organisations

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because as the rapport would be close between

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and workers they can exchange their ideas and thoughts with each other without having any fear of superiority or inferiority.

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, labours closeness with

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define

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equality at offices and

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is the best example of liberalisation .

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to

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as much as the staff would be near with their head officers there would be

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chances of dispute among them.

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, communication is indeed a crucial factor in the betterment of a company.

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, some intellectuals think that

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communication there are some other facets

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are more influential .

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, some people say that there should be some

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rules

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and regulations in companies which should be definitely followed by

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the whole

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management of a company ,

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no smoking in the building .

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, discipline is

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another factor which should be obeyed by every staff

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of

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the

corporation.

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, if

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employee wants

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leave for any reason he or she should have to allowance of the manager

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of taking

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off without the permission of their seniors. In conclusion, after assessing

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parts of

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question, I genuinely feel that

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these

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both

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arguments are valid and have their own importance but

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have more inclination towards the former view of

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discussion.