Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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born without knowledge as well as intellect. Due to the

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they start to learn everything

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, world and so on. For

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some people claim that

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have

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possibility

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for obtaining new information

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as languages. I definitely agree with

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argument that they can learn foreign languages faster than

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,

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should say that

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start their life with

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and the main factor is communication skills,

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mean that they will speak in

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in which you speak. It gives

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that they

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can acquire

skills in any

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.

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, I want to mention that when

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learn

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they understand and learn rules faster than

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, if we compare brain work with

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and

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we can understand that there have more

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. Personally,

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think that

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should be in control after

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they can achieve amazing results.

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,

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will be more concentrated and focused

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their goals to learn

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the language

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, they will work hardly and correctly than

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without being distracted.

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,

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do not understand more yet they want to play games with friends but not study while elderly people try to achieve their goals and be concentrated. In conclusion,

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strongly recommend to parents understand to

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what they should do.

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think that

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look after and think about their future life.