Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Children

born without knowledge as well as intellect. Due to the

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they start to learn everything

language

, world and so on. For

this

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some people claim that

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teen-agers

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have

excellent

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possibility

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possibilities

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for obtaining new information

such

as languages. I definitely agree with

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argument that they can learn foreign languages faster than

adults

.

Firstly

,

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should say that

children

start their life with

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and the main factor is communication skills,

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mean that they will speak in

this

language

in which you speak. It gives

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us

concept

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that they

canacquire

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can acquire

skills in any

language

.

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, I want to mention that when

teen-agers

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learn

new

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language

they understand and learn rules faster than

adults

.

For example

, if we compare brain work with

children

and

adults

we can understand that there have more

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. Personally,

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think that

children

should be in control after

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they can achieve amazing results.

On the other hand

,

adults

will be more concentrated and focused

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their goals to learn

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the language

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.

In other words

, they will work hardly and correctly than

children

without being distracted.

For instance

,

children

do not understand more yet they want to play games with friends but not study while elderly people try to achieve their goals and be concentrated. In conclusion,

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strongly recommend to parents understand to

children

what they should do.

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i

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think that

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look after and think about their future life.