You have just finished a language course provided by your company and want an- other. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter you should say: - why you liked the course - why you need more - and say where and when the course should take place

Dear Vanessa, Thank you for allowing me to take the ‘French for Sales Staff’
course
with Multi- Lingua
last
week. It was extremely useful and I learnt a lot, not only in terms of vocabulary and grammar, but
also
linguistic style. It was a great opportunity to swap experiences with sales staff from other companies and industries too. As I mentioned when I
first
asked to take the
course
, I think that one week of study is not going to be enough in order to make sure that my French is at the required level, so I would like to apply to take the advanced
course
which takes place from 20th to 25th February at the same location in Swindon. Since
this
course
finishes just before we begin the big sales push in France, I think that
this
would be perfect timing. We still have enough money in the budget to cover the cost of the
course
and I was able to handle my workload whilst taking the intermediate
course
. Best regards, Jessica
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