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Teachers used to convey information, but now students have access to a wide resources of information, there is no role for teachers to play in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#teachers #information #students #access #resources #role #education
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It is suggested that
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 are no longer required in the
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filed
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 of education since there are various routes for
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 to inquire
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 they need. I completely disagree that the role of a teacher is any less important these days. It is true that with the development of the Internet,
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 and relevant
knowledges
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knowledge
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 are more approachable than before.
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, not everything we find on the Internet is completely accurate. The ability
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 the
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 gathered in a critical and logical way is often taught by
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. If
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 were taken out of the path of learning,
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 would not have the capability to determine whether
thay
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they
 have found the correct
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.
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, aside from delivering
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knowledge
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 and
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,
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 educate
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 in various ways,
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, having
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 in classes provides
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 with the opportunity of human interaction, which is vital for human society.
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,
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 stimulate
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' interests in learning.
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, I used to hate English because it was too complicated for me to understand, but I fell in love with it because of my middle school English teacher who encouraged me and showed me the charm of the language.
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, every student is unique,
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 are able to notice these characteristics and offer help to different
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accordingly
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. In conclusion,
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education no matter how abundant the resources of
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