People nowadays prefer to interact online e g do shopping chat with friends rather than talking to other people face to face. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Technology
has a huge impact on every individual in today's world. In
ongoing
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time the public is more and more dependent on electronic media for accomplishing their day to day activities.
For instance
, folks are now easily able to do shopping from across the globe or communicate with
people
without
in person
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contact.
Nevertheless
, there are some positives and negatives of
this
development and there are many causes attributed to
this
.
To begin
with the reasons,
firstly
, advancement in
technology
has made everything quite simple.
For example
, shopping in early times was a hectic activity for some, but nowadays it is effortless to just select items online sites and get
it
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shipped to our home.
Moreover
, you can see reviews for the product from the previous buyers, which can help you to decide about the product to get suiting you the best.
Secondly
, the causes of more online interaction with friends and family
is
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simply because numerous
people
are moving from one part of the world to another to
fulfill
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their dreams of a better lifestyle or to pursue their
career
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.
Additionally
,
technology
has greatly helped them being in touch with their loved ones without making
one
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them
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feel homesick.
In contrast
, as there are many positives of applied sciences in our lives there are
also
some drawbacks.
People
are not feeling the need of moving out of home regularly.
This
habit is leading to many serious health issues contributed by
sedentary
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a sedentary
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lifestyle,
for example
,
people
had to go out of their dwellings frequently for bank work, paying school fees, electricity bills in previous times. While
this
all can be done today just by sitting at home comfortably.
Moreover
,
people
use
to mingle
time
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from time
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to time before the introduction of social media, personally visit for inviting
people
to special occasions or meeting to look after
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the patient
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patient
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patients
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.
This
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These
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all small gestures have been erasing from our community now which were helpful for strengthening the human bond. In conclusion, in my opinion,
this
is a positive development if we
use
technical knowledge wisely.
In other words
, we must
use
technology
, and not
technology
must
use
us. Surely, there is no doubt the advancement in mechanization has made every individual's life easy and time-saving.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • instant messaging apps
  • social media platforms
  • convenience
  • customer reviews
  • multitask
  • fulfilling responsibilities
  • safety concerns
  • immersive technology
  • interactions
  • preference
  • necessity
  • substitute for face-to-face interactions
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