In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving older railway lines. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Travelling from
one
place to another the best way is
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is training
train
. Because it is convenient for all age people
from child to old age one
. Although
, train
travel
is fast as compared to the bus or own vehicle. if any crossing are
not there. Due to these Change the verb form
is
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reasons
reason
some Add a comma
,reason
people
think that,
spending more money for building new tracks to overcome from crossing to other Remove the comma
apply
train
but, some people
want to repare
old tracks. Correct your spelling
repair
In
totally agree with making Correct your spelling
I
new
Correct article usage
a new
track
for fast travel
.
To begin
with, train
travel
is convenient for older age as well as child
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a child
also
because it contain
all type of facilities like bathroom, sleeper seat as well as Change the verb form
contains
air condition
coach etc. so, nearly 80 Add a hyphen
air-condition
percent
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per cent
middle class
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middle-class
people
go with train
. Add an article
the train
Although
, as per financial reason train
ticket is affordable for all. for instance
, for long journey human want to go with
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by
train
but, trains are not available due to Add an article
the train
lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
track
so, they have to cancel their trip.
Secondly
, making new
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a new
track
is essential
issue for travelling. Because as Add an article
an essential
human
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a human
being
they have a tendency to Fix the agreement mistake
beings
travel
fast from one
place to another. Moreover
, due to fast life
they don’t have much time to spend on travelling. And that’s the reason making Add a comma
,life
new
Add an article
a new
track
is conveniant
and new they can not create any issue. To illustrate, in Correct your spelling
convenient
metro
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a metro
city
like Mumbai Fix the agreement mistake
cities
people
are confused about local as well as regional train
and they run from Fix the agreement mistake
trains
one
to other platform
.
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another platform
other platforms
Thirdly
, making new track
point out about are under railway department because sometimes because of using more space some people
lost their houses.
To be specific with
, some Change preposition
apply
people
do up and down on daily basis from pune
to Mumbai and vice versa but, Change the capitalization
Pune
train
frequency is less due to lack of track
. Although
it takes near 3 hours time. If we make more tracks people
also
save their time and railway department got more financial benefit from that also
.
Lastly
, in my opinion
making Add a comma
,opinion
new
Add an article
a new
track
is most important but as well as repair old track
. both are useful for fast travelling from one
city another
.Change preposition
to another
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