In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving older railway lines. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
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people
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repare
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.
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the train
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a lack
track
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a new
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essential
issue for travelling. Because as Add an article
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beings
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one
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conveniant
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convenient
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a metro
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like Mumbai Fix the agreement mistake
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people
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train
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other platform
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people
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track
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people
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also
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also
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opinion
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a new
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is most important but as well as repair old Use synonyms
track
. both are useful for fast travelling from Use synonyms
one
city Use synonyms
another
.Change preposition
to another
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