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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Recently, there are a variety of families that both mother and father go to work. Because of the heavy workload, some parents accept that
grandparents
 can take
care
 of their kids. While the others think childcare organisations can offer the best
care
. On the one hand, child
care
 services are appropriate for parents that do not have time to take responsibility
of
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 their offspring.
Hence
, it is
such
 a variety of kindergartens that occur widely. To be more specific, the preschool is one of the most professional organizations for taking
care
 of
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a teenager
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teenager
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teenagers
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. There are
the
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units that are well-trained to quickly react when problems are caused to our
kid
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kids
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.
For example
, children are easily found to get injured from daily activities as an experienced babysit, who can give exactly medical treatment for our youngsters.
Moreover
, child
care
 centres are
such
 a great environment for our kids that help them to develop language and communication skills.
Additionally
, Being interact with peers surrounding which can enhance social skills and a sense of community. Even more, If our offspring are under the supervision of the staff, they will not perceive loneliness.
On the other hand
, being taken
care
 of by
grandparents
 is
significant
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 benefit. Since the family members are willing to look after their grandchildren. As well as,
grandparents
 are supposed to have extensive experience in raising children.
Then
, the descendant was nurtured by the predecessor may develop attachment in domestic.
Also
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grandparents
 can oriented grandchildren
be
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a good parents
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a good parent
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 in the future. In conclusion,
although
 there are arguments in favour of keeping children at home, I believe that
toddler
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toddlers
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 should be sent to childcare centres for better
care
.
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