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In many countries, the amount of crimes is increasing. What do you think the main cause of the crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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Globally,
Crime
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 rate has been increasing day by day. They are various reasons for
growth
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the growth
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 of
crimes
. Some of the reasons are overexposure to
internet
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the internet
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, lack of
education
, scarcity of money and psychological problems. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both causes and solutions.
First
 of all,
Education
 plays a major role in
development
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 of
ones
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one's
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 life mentally.
Although
, Countries around the world developing
similarly
,
crime
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 rate is
also
 increasing mostly
on
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among
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 women due to
lack
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a lack
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 of sex
education
. Around the
world
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,world
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 women are suffering the most.
For example
, In 2010, There is a case in India on
medical
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the medical
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student
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students
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 which
shaked
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 all over the world. In
this
 case, many of the uneducated men along with teenagers are involved. Not only
education
,
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overexposure to the internet
also
 leads to
this
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crimes
. As technology is advancing, based on
this
crimes
 are
also
 increasing. As technology can be used both positively and negatively but many
of
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the
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teenagers are opting
wrong
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for wrong
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 ways
such
 as
juveniule
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juvenile
 rapes as well hacking.
Secondly
,
Crime
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 rate is increasing because of
scarcity
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the scarcity
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 of money due to unemployment, overpopulation. So, As
population
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the population
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 is increasing, many
people
does
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do
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 not have their desired jobs. Thereby, poverty leads the
people
walk
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 in
wrong
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the wrong
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path
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paths
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such
 as robbery, smuggling of goods and drugs.
For instance
, Gun culture is common in America but due to lack of money, many
people
 are using
this weapons
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this weapon
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 to kill innocent
people
. There
is
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 no strict rules to eradicate it. Currently, many
people
 are undergoing
lot
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 of stress, depression and getting emotional
breakdown
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breakdowns
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 due to some personal problems which
leads
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 to assassinations in anger. Altogether, These factors have the solutions
where
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 from early ages in schools, sex
education
 must be included. Along with
this
, parents should observe their children while using
internet
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the internet
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 and they need to explain the disadvantages as well as they need to check the mental state of their children and need to teach them how to overcome every problem in their life. Parents should spend some time with their children, so they can express feelings, emotions and helps to increase bonding between them. While
,
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government
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the government
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 should provide jobs as well as they need to take measures to control
population
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the population
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. Together with
this
, they need to implement strict laws, so that, no one dares to do
such
type
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types
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 of
crimes
 again.
Therefore
,
Government
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the Government
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 along with
the
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society can solve the rates of
crime
 happening in our daily life.
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