Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
think that many food and drink products
contain high levels of sugar, so in the long-term, people
would have many adverse health issues. I disagree with this
statement because although
sugary products
are bad for people
who consume them, they are still cheaper than healthy food, which some people
cannot purchase
. Therefore
, the price of sugary products
should be increased to discourage people
from buying them.
On the one hand, the main cause why many people
want sugary products
is because they are very delicious when sugar is put into foods
or drink products
. The government
should increase the price of sugary products
to more expensive; people
will avoid purchasing these. However
, many people
will have several health problems such
as obesity disease, high blood pressure, and heart disease in the long term. Although
these will be more expensive, in the long-term, people
will pay less money for medical care, or they need not pay it.
Even though healthy foods
or less sugary products
are good for our body, some people
cannot purchase
them because these products
are more expensive than sugary products
, so they have a few choices for choosing between sugary products
and healthy products
. The government
should encourage farmers to grow their vegetables or other products
without chemical fertilizers and insecticides because that makes people
eat them more. In addition
, the government
should limit sugary eating products
per once buying. In addition
, many products
are not sugary products
, such
as monosodium glutamate and other products
that negatively affect the body, and are cheap, so people
can easily purchase
them. Therefore
, the government
should increase their price to more expensive than sugary products
because monosodium glutamate products
are more dangerous than sugary products
.
To conclude, I disagree with the statement because some people
cannot purchase
good foods
or healthy foods
, but they still purchase
sugary products
in a small volume. In addition
, the government
should increase the cost of monosodium glutamate products
to more expensive.Submitted by nutt.spider on
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