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Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance.

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It has long been a subject of discussion whether computers have aided human life or disregarded the actual purpose. In my opinion, the former notion has several elements that are questionable and deserve attention. Using pertinent arguments shall explain the same below. There are many debates and discussions in favour of possessing
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 technology, the most noticeable ones
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 in the fact that it has increased human efficiency far better than actual
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labor oriented
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 days. Things like shopping, banking and reservation booking are available
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 our fingertips that may
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 consume more of the energy and time of an individual if done manually.
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 of a task increases when considering the amount of workload
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 are prone to errors that.
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 usage of the technology exhausts human ability which
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 turn reduces their productivity levels. It contains the potential to
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deliver
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 large amounts of a person’s time. Not only it deprives a person’s leisure time but
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 invites several physical barriers
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 for eg: dull eyesight weak legs and frequent headaches.
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 not forgetting the costs along with breakdown repairs and replacement that require a lot of diligence are a part of the havoc.
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, it could be asserted that the device
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 cause much harm to the human
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 in various ways they do have made giant improvements no doubt in areas like communication, medicine, outwork, education and many more. These days it is very much possible to roam around virtually at your doorstep
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 has extended its boundaries to various other developments.
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 it still creates and plays
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 major part in the carbon emission which in turn degrades the life of future generations.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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