Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

It is often thought that increment in
fuel
price is the main method in solving rising
trafic
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traffic
jam
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and pollution
crisis
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.I strongly disagree that increasing the
fuel
price is not the
solve
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to the high level of holdup in
the
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society.
This
essay will discuss other effective strategies that can be put in place to curb
this
issue.
Firstly
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belief
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that citizens will find means of fueling
there
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their
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vehicles in-other to move around and achieved their target daily goals by sourcing for other means of income and having multiple streams of earning money. By so doing,people are likely to have more cars which will cause more danger to the gridlock.
For example
, in Nigeria during the
fuel
scarcity
due
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the increase in price,I started selling cold tigernut
drink
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using my car at a secondary school adjacent
my
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workplace
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work place
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workplace
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which I use the proceed from
this
business to augment my
fuel
expense.
Secondly
, the government should rather focus on other ways of eradicating causes of traffic congestion and air pollution by fixing
of
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bad
road
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and potholes which will enhance
smooth
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movement of vehicles,
also
enforce or structure a plan that each family or household
is entitle
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to a car,with
this
effect I believe
number
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the number
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of vans plying the good road will reduce drastically and there will be free and
fare
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fair
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movement on the road. In conclusion,
i
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I
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strongly believe that
surge
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a surge
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in
fuel
cost will rather allow the population to think outside the box in making more money to maintain their standard of living rather the government should
fixed
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all the bad roads and restrict each family to one car.
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