some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while other think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. what are these factors? which, all of the factors, do you think are the most important.

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the countries should be measured
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their
success by their GDP growth,
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some
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countries should
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consider
different factors to measure the success apart from economic progress
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as like GNH,
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measureing
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the economic growth will be important for all
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countries
To begin
with,the economic growth is
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factor for all countries
for example
if a nation is strong in GDP leads to better
envirornment
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environment
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