Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter • describe what you like about the library • say what you don’t like • make suggestions for improvements.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am really excited about

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part of the improvements.I am one of your regular users of

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library

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.In fact, since my early

childhood

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I loved to visit

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centre. There are a lot of books which are rare to get outside of the city and it has good quality internet browsing . Somehow there is something I have to tell which are those I do not like to place,

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the newspaper drag is very messy because it has a lot of magazines between them. After

that

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the main important thing is

insufficient

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printer and photocopy papers.another part of

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library

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,

rest room

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and canteen has not been cleaned well in recent days.

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,I would like to recommend some useful improvements

about

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valuable wealth.please make some

arrangement

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of

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the newspapers and

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separate the magazines from newspapers. As well as make sure about the condition of all printers and photocopy machines, if it is replaced it will be fine .Do some arrangements for cleaning labours related to cleaning the canteen and

library

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. I hope these will satisfy the addition of

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new

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. Thanking you Faithfully, Kiru.Thirumal