The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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letter to express my annoyance over the noise emitted from your restaurant. I am Praveena Tirumala residing in 12 street Nallagandla and I stay behind your diner. Your joint

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parties every night and plays loud jarring music, which is causing a huge disturbance for us. I have kids who are in 10 and 12 classes and will be appearing for their board exams

this

year. Of late they are finding it difficult to concentrate on their studies. I recommend you modify the acoustic architecture of your outlet. Please consider installing soundproof glasses or using sound-absorbing materials like rock wool, fibreglass, wood fibre to avoid sound transmission. They can help you in noise attenuation as much as 10db. It would be helpful if you can start the renovation immediately. If you continue the same way without any changes,

then

I will have no choice but to approach you legally. I have checked with my lawyer and will not hesitate to issue a legal notice.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to globalization, many countries lose their traditions and national values. Some people think it is the responsibility of governments to protect these values. Do you agree or disagree?

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