Minority languages Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The problem of whether public salary should be invested in
opposition
sound preserving
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so that the less using speech can escape from disappear immediately, is now provoking a wide discussion. Some argue that it is useless and wasteful
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because it will take extra energies and tons of
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which actually increase the burden of government. Personally, I still support remaining
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opposition
word. Some
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supporting to maintain the
opposition
word is due to the
further
meaning behind the dialect itself. dialect is not just a communication tool in the history of human civilization. It is actually connecting the present to the past, the youth to the old. The disappearance of the minority
language
that might lead to the loss of cultural identity stems from the extinction of a
language
, accompanied by the disruption connect between the youth
generation
with the elderly
generation
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meant, to take one example, that their children who cannot study their original style may disable to communicate with their grandparents naturally, feeling confusing and anxiety in
this
unusual family structure. At the same time, the young
generation
also
hard understand their own culture as well as their traditional icons from any references and documentaries which will
also
cause their identity loss. Compare those supporters, who hold the opinions to preserve the
opposition
dialect, others think that keeping those
opposition
languages would request spend constantly increased money year after year, and those funding may better invest in other projects like fundamental establishment and facilities enhancing
that is
an advantage to their own citizens. The communities would pay more tax due to the increasing expenditure on
opposition
languages remain. Those
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ignore the influence of
language
disappearance and
also
underestimate the impact of
language
power owing to calculate the short-term loss. And
also
not recognise that style is not just as simple as communication tools
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and is obviously human crystal of culture and wisdom from one
generation
pass on the
next
. Different cultures coming together enriching society diversity
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and is hard to count its value,
however
. In conclusion,
although
opposition
language
may be used less and less because of the declining of community use and to preserve it might take extra fund from the authority departments,
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should consider the meaning which hinders on the surface and crowd should be more friendly to accept those difference and embrace those cultural diversity. sound is a treasure trove not just the communication tools.
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