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Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?

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There are different schools of thought on which educational systems are based upon. In some institutions, students are taught multiple
subjects
 till they complete schooling whereas in others they tend to focus on specific
subjects
 at an early
age
. Each school has their own merits and demerits but I believe that studying a wide range of
subjects
 at school is advantageous for deciding the future. Certain institutions want children to study a different kind of
subject
 matter in schools before entering college. One of the advantages of
this
 system is that it allows students to decide on
subject
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 of their choice to pursue in the future. Individuals who are interested in the arts and history during their early schooling can choose to pursue arts in their college
thus
 paving a path for their success. Certain individuals are of the opinion that children should be taught in specific by the
age
 of 15.
For example
, parents are enrolling their kids
for
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 coding classes at a very young
age
 so that they can take up
this
 profession in the future. There is a distinct advantage to learn
the
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 interesting
subject
 at an early
age
 and to master it in later years. One possible disadvantage of
this
 is that losing interest in the
subject
 over the period will be difficult to move on to a different profession. In my opinion, both systems of education
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 their pros and cons,
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 if children are allowed to study all the
subjects
 in their early schooling and decision based on the liking of the
subject
 will help them excel in their profession.
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