Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house?

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to determine which type of accommodation

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suits them. While some

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believe that living in a

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is better, I would agree with those who argue that living in a flat is more advantageous.

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with, there are several reasons

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why some

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prefer to live in a

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,

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are often spacious as they allow to have multiple rooms for many purposes

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as bedrooms, living rooms, or dining rooms;

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,

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fit families who have a lot of members

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as parents, offspring, and elderly

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.

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, since most of the

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are separated from each other by fences or trees, they

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therefore

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provide

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privacy for

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owners as they would not be bothered by their

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noise, or feel others are less intrusive by others.

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, there are two main advantages of living in apartments that eclipse the benefits of living in a

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. From an economical perspective, most of the prices of flat rentals are much cheaper in comparison to

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prices;

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, they are affordable by the majority of

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whether they are students, working

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, or even small

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.

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, most

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apartment

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buildings are more secured rather than

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is because there are most likely surveillance cameras covering most of the entrances and exits of these

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. What is more, there are often security guards or intercom systems that contribute

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preventing burglars from breaking into the building.

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, most of the

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are merely secured with door locks which can be broken easily by thieves, and there is

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less chance

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having an advanced alarm system

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costly to install. In conclusion,

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there are obvious benefits for living in a

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as they provide more space and privacy, I opine that the merits of living in flats are more significant as they are economically convenient for many

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and more secured than

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.