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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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We live in a world in which everyone is judgmental to the extent that
one
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 often makes inconsequential remarks in regards to things that do not affect
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 in the least bit,
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 as if other
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 are driving a Lamborgini or if they are carrying a Hermes bag. It seems as though old fashioned values
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 as honour, generosity, and trust do not amount to much in today's condemnatory world. Apropos of the statement, I am in part in accordance with it. It is inarguable that a staggering number of
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 only consider how their connection can bring advantages to them when befriending
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.
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,
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 might think twice before making friends with
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 who is kind but impoverished, as there is no benefit
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 likely to stem from the connection. On the flip side, ingratiating with
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 who displays ostentatious wealth might be more auspicious for
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 in the future.
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,
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 from a wealthy family might feel hesitant to befriend
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 who is struggling to make ends meet, seeing as the latter is not on the same level as
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 in terms of social
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.
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, there is no guarantee that
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 will not be on the receiving end of bullying if
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 befriends
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 of a lower
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. Case in point, kids from my school will not let Jaycee hear the end of it because she is friends with Elaine, a driver's daughter, notwithstanding the fact that Elaine is trustworthy and dependable. In contrast, I
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 believe that it is unreasonable to stereotype the whole society based on the behaviour and way of thinking of some
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. Like the aforementioned case in which Jaycee is willing to befriend Elaine despite being bullied, it shows that it is possible for some
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 to value trust and generosity over social
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. To sum up, while it is commonplace for
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 to hold a higher value of material possessions and social
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 in
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 overcritical world, there are
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people
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 who value old fashioned values more and they are not to be overlooked.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social status
  • material possessions
  • old-fashioned values
  • honour
  • kindness
  • trust
  • empathy
  • media influence
  • self-worth
  • metrics of success
  • financial achievements
  • community contributions
  • superficial connections
  • emotional bonds
  • life satisfaction
  • stress and anxiety
  • policy changes
  • community programs
  • restoring balance
  • personal character
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