Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Technological advancements
has
simplified the life of the individual. Shopping on Change the verb form
have
internet
and Correct article usage
the internet
ordering
books , flight tickets and groceries has increased in Change the form of the verb
order
the
recent times. In my Correct article usage
apply
opinion
the advantages of shopping online Add a comma
,opinion
is
definitely more as compared to the disadvantages and will explain in the below essay.
Internet shopping is trending due to two reasons. Change the verb form
are
First
of all
it is easier and can be done from the workplace or home. The difficulties in commuting to the shop with loss of valuable Add a comma
,all
time
is
saved by Change the verb form
are
this
. In the recent pandemic
online shopping with Chitki, spar and nature's basket are Add a comma
,pandemic
boon
to all the households as everything and anything can be shopped and delivered to home. Fix the agreement mistake
boons
Additionally
, there are variety
of choices to choose from. Add an article
a variety
For
example
Myntra has Add a comma
,example
Correct article usage
a minimal
minimal
of 10000 clothes of various brands and Replace the word
minimum
further
can be filtered according to our choice. Thus
online shopping has significantly changed our lives.
At the same time
there are some demerits, Add a comma
,time
such
as losing our money by getting conned by people. Recently my friends
mother gave her ATM pin to a stranger for completing Change to a genitive case
friend's
friends'
transaction
losing Correct article usage
a transaction
a
enormous amount of money. Change the article
an
Also
, rarely the ordered product may be faulty but most of these platforms give refunds for the same.
To conclude, online shopping has improved our life by saving our time
, reducing the effort as well as plethora
of choices available Correct article usage
the plethora
in
these platforms. But at the same Change preposition
on
time
we need to be cautious by not getting carried away and taking care of our money.Add a comma
,time
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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