some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good members in society. Others, However believes that school are the place to learn it.
Several people argue that children have to be taught by their parents they learn how to communicate with other societies and get a connection and create a network between them.
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However
, some societies believe that a good place to learn about that is
in the academy. I think both the argument is a good idea, not only parents that have to teach the kid, but also
school has that responsibility too in a different way. firstly
, fathers need to teach their teenagers how to be active in society and give benefits to them. a mother who always give
lessons about Correct subject-verb agreement
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a great society always Change the verb form
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their adolescent Correct subject-verb agreement
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, since the age of 3, the mother always teach
their baby to say thanks, please, Correct subject-verb agreement
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, teach
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, an institution is the best place to help kids face the world and be better citizens. in school ,usually
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of
students to learn more about attitude. Change preposition
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For
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instead
, adolescents have to communicate with other students about the
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task
, homework, or just playing games, Fix the agreement mistake
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, and others. Fix the agreement mistake
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Besides
, in the academy, youngsters must communicate with teachers which mean
older than them. and they have to know how to figure outCorrect subject-verb agreement
means
communicate
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communication
to conclude
, both parents and institutions have Correct article usage
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion