Some people believe that it would be better if the whole family involved in bringing up children rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

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appropriately is an integral part of

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society.

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, some

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argue that the entire family should be a part of raising the

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as compared to only

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being involved. In my opinion, the close family should be a vital part of it because the advantages outweigh the disadvantage. On one hand, a major drawback of family coming together and caring for the

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is that the privacy of the

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and the

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is infiltrated. If the family as a whole is involved in the process of

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of a

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all the problems and issues that the

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faces is like an open book.

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will not only lead to embarrassment for both the

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and

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but

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cause a decline in their self-esteem and confidence.

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, if only a few close

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were counted on for

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caring the situation will be

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.

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, most of the time if

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are busy they can rely on these

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to look after and take care of the

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. They are someone the

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can rely on.

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would

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give a feeling of security to the

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as well.

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, they would have someone else to look upon not just their

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.

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,

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will

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learn how to live in a community or a society.

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family is a mixture of many personalities and types of

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.

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would

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equip the

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to survive with different types of

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.

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, through the involvement of their

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they would learn how to live like a family and interact with different kinds of

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. To conclude, the question of whether training and instructing

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during their development phase should include

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of their

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have been debated for

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. In my opinion, even though it could lead to intervention in the

children

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’s and parent’s life, it has more advantages as compared to

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disadvantage.