Some people believe that it would be better if the whole family involved in bringing up children rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

Raising

children

appropriately is an integral part of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

society.

Therefore

, some

people

argue that the entire family should be a part of raising the

children

as compared to only

parents

being involved. In my opinion, the close family should be a vital part of it because the advantages outweigh the disadvantage. On one hand, a major drawback of family coming together and caring for the

child

is that the privacy of the

child

and the

parents

is infiltrated. If the family as a whole is involved in the process of

upbringing

Add an article

the upbringing

show examples

of a

child

all the problems and issues that the

child

faces is like an open book.

This

will not only lead to embarrassment for both the

parents

and

children

but

also

cause a decline in their self-esteem and confidence.

On the contrary

, if only a few close

relatives

were counted on for

child

caring the situation will be

opposite

Correct article usage

the opposite

show examples

.

Firstly

, most of the time if

parents

are busy they can rely on these

relatives

to look after and take care of the

children

. They are someone the

parents

can rely on.

This

would

also

give a feeling of security to the

children

as well.

For example

, they would have someone else to look upon not just their

parents

.

Secondly

,

Children

will

also

learn how to live in a community or a society.

Joint

Correct article usage

A joint

show examples

family is a mixture of many personalities and types of

people

.

This

would

further

equip the

children

to survive with different types of

people

.

Therefore

, through the involvement of their

relatives

Add a comma

,relatives

show examples

they would learn how to live like a family and interact with different kinds of

people

. To conclude, the question of whether training and instructing

children

during their development phase should include

involvement

Correct article usage

the involvement

show examples

of their

relatives

have been debated for

Correct your spelling

quite

show examples

quiet

Correct your spelling

quite

show examples

sometime

Replace the word

some time

show examples

. In my opinion, even though it could lead to intervention in the

children

’s and parent’s life, it has more advantages as compared to

this

disadvantage.