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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#universities #numbers #students
In our contemporary era,
gender
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 issue is often a big concern as people believe that schools need to balance the
number
 of male and female
students
 in all of
courses
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the courses
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. In my opinion, I disagree with the above statement and I will put forth some ideas to demonstrate my point in the following paragraphs. On the on hand, balancing the
number
 of girls and their
counterpart
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 in the classroom plays an essential role as it can help
students
 integrate better and gain remarkable learning outcomes. Studies show that
students
 in courses that have equal
gender
 distribution have higher overall academic achievement and engage better compared to other classes.
Moreover
, even
number
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 of
students
 in various subjects can contribute to the equal
gender
workfoce
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workforce
 in the future work market.
On the other hand
, assessing
qualifications
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 of candidates based on their genders
instead
 of academic achievements may not be fair to pupils. In some distinct fields
such
 as construction engineers or electricians, the
number
 of male participants often outnumber that of their counterparts.
As a result
, in order to achieve
the
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gender
 equality in these majors, priority may be given to less qualified female
students
 and many potential candidates may be disqualified which may cause a great loss of
talents
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. Qualifications of examinees should be
assesed
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assessed
 based on their effort,
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extracurricular
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extra curricular
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 activity, experience, motivation and academic achievement during their study. In conclusion, it is true that a healthy balance classroom may bring many positive effects on learning
outcome
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,
however
, other criteria
such
 as academic qualifications, motivation and etc. should
also
 be considered evenly among
test takers
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 in order to maintain a competitive and impartial environment in university exams.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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