Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that the govern should make it free for all students no matter what financial condition they have . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education
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is the fundamental
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of everyone . The
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ratio
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increasing day by day .It is
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issue that government should provide free college
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with all kinds of facilities.Here, I , strongly agree with
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will be mentioning my point in the upcoming paragraph. The
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and foremost reason to support my ideology is that every person of
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has a basic
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to gain
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education
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without any cost.
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, people are paying
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to the government and
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party should satisfy their needs
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as higher
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and so on.
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, many western countries , provide free
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to their residence and
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idea lead to
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.
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, everyone has not
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capacity that they pay the
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fees and for them it is
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.
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provide
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free
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it is
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beneficial for
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that academic development increase and
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will decrease . It is
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situation for both .
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, ruling party help
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who are poor so richest man
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angry they might be fought.
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, the unity might be collapsed .
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, for better development and smooth functioning of country people should have knowledge and
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so government should focus on that.
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, in the USA there is only 6% unemployment
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which is very neglatable compare to other
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. Having gone through the matter in some
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it can be concluded that , ruling party make sure to give free
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and
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should focus more on
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than financial condition .I hope
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trend is
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conducive
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for young ones.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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