You want to arrange a conference for your company and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include: • Details about the conference • Why you want your colleague to give presentation • What arrangement will you do for this conference

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Sarmad I am writing to ask for your help in the Data Mining conference which is going to be held on the 20th of July in Milad tower. Hundreds of professional developers from the biggest companies in IT will join our conference in 2 days.
First
It will start with the introduction to basic statistics and data engineering courses on Tuesday. The
second
day will be just workshops to help them learn and write practical project’s codes in Python. As you are one of the most powerful persons in the field I would rather invite you to be with our team at least on the
first
day by giving a presentation about basic statistics needed for analyzing data. I have to coordinate presentations and
also
workshop teams.
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, finding the best key parameter indicators to measure the performances of the attendees with the goal of choosing them for our summer camp is the hardest part. I count on you in that part too. I am looking forward to your answer. It is critical to
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me in 48 hours. Yours Sincerely, Maria
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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