Many developing countries place a lot of importance on tourism. Why is this? Do you think that this is a positive or negative development?
It seems that priorities may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that the singular verb tells does not agree with the plural compound subject nature and infrastructure. Consider changing the verb to the plural form.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
The singular verb is does not appear to agree with the plural subject ratings. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
It appears that well developed is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase Due to its infrastructure and tourism places. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma before the dependent clause marker because. Consider removing the comma.
The indefinite article a may not be required with the plural noun numbers in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.