The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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human history, it has obviously been observed that in the past, people and their governments suffered from a lot of difficult problems
such
as pandemic diseases, expanded poverty and famine as well as a wide array of wars. But nowadays thanks to modernity, technology and awareness, these adverse aspects of human lives have considerably shrunk and rectified. From
this
perspective, I would maintain that
although
pay attention to safety issues in different
Countries
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should be considered, improving public health and expanding research fields by more investments from governments should not be underestimated.
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and foremost, there are numerous pieces of evidence that different countries have confronted with many safety problems.
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, some ordeals: unavoidable economical competitions and differences among local people sometimes necessarily need to control
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the governments. As a consequence of that existing (existence) of military forces might
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such
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third
-world impoverished countries.
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the other hand, by reserving a huge amount of resources which are annually spent in order to promote armed forces throughout the world, the public health issues as one of the most
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humanity can significantly be upgraded and improved towards the ideal living situations for all people.
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, undoubtedly the progress of technological instruments in various areas should not be negligible. It has meant that the more we can try to achieve a lot of
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(positive) consequences from
this
area, the more we can benefit from striking outcomes.
Hence
, the pros of decreasing the armed forces throughout the world can strikingly eclipse the cons.
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