Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Happiness
is undoubtedly
utmost
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important thing in everyone's
life
. Definition of
happiness
can be different in respect to
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the situation
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situation
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situations
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in which a person is there currently.
Happiness
is a difficult term to define because
it's
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its
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meaning for everybody
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change for various reasons and existing parameters.
For
instance
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for one person with a simple rough rustic
life
with
large
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a large
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family around makes him or
her
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she
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contended whereas
same
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the same
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situation with another person can be frustrating . Satisfied patients can make
surgeon
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surgeons
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happy whereas some surgeons may not like their job at all. There can be many factors
which
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that
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are crucial for utmost
happiness
and contentment.
Firstly
it is satisfaction in our
life
which can be in any field like our job or any business which we do , if we will love our job
than
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only it can give us
happiness
otherwise
we will work
inheartidly
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heartily
heartedly
and
secondly
positive approach towards our
life
no what situation arrives in front of us.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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