The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?

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present, an excessive number of people are anxious , as the cruelties that are presented by music lyrics , video games and movies impact adversely

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youths. We will discuss most principal problems arising and

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two following remedies which can reduce

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in entertainment promotes aggressive emotion;

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of suicide and offences. To illustrate, Most teenagers have

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associated with peer pressure or depression

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of suicide , accidental murder or ravishment. A

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of death or delinquency. In fact ,

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, afflicting victims is not arduous for him because he has often seen bloodthirstiness and other inhumanity in movies and

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films and clips should be prohibited that

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sadism,

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inhumanity. In South Korea, a lot of clips and TV programs are unable to be presented because authorities appear that aggressive descriptions may impact minorities adversely ;as a result of

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number of young criminals is inferior among Asian countries. Another remedy is parents should curtail inappropriate

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which are seen by their children. In conclusion,

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aggressive entertainment is making minorities have

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to control their negative emotions and increasing adult offenders, oversight of authorities and parents can reduce that adverse outcome.