Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Friends
are the most important thing that happens in our life. Everyone must have at least
one
friend.There are conflicting views with regards to whether it is important to choose
friends
who always have the same
opinion
or
friends
who sometimes disagree with
one
another.
On the other hand
, those who support the view that
friends
must always have the same
opinion
have their valid reason.
Firstly
,
friends
who share the same
opinion
always be in a harmonious situation with each other. They do not fight with each other because they do not have anything to argue with. They always agree with the
opinion
that given by other
friends
.
Furthermore
, they support each other in every situation especially when
one
of them face a bad situation.
For instance
, these kinds of
friends
back up
one
and another when getting into a fight with someone else.
On the other hand
, those who support the view that it is good for
friends
who sometimes disagree with each other to have their own strong arguments. They feel that
friends
who sometimes argue with
one
another can get to change a different view and
opinion
.
For instance
, change views about the current issue that just happened. By doing
this
, they can extend their idea and share the idea with other people.
Moreover
, these
friends
can get to know each other when they started to have an argument.
As a result
, they more understand each other and try to get along for a long time. In conclusion, it is more important to have
friends
who sometimes disagree because we can get along with each other.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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