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Global environment issues are the responsibilities of rich nations not of the poor nation. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Global environmental
issues
havee
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have
 drawn attention to governments all over the world. Rich
nations
 are fully responsible for these
issues
 is debatable.
This
 essay will discuss why both wealthy and poor
countries
 should respond
for
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 that. Rich
nations
 should take charge of global environmental
issues
. Those areas are normally producing a large
amount
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 of pollutions in order to maintain economic activities. Human activities in wealthy areas,
such
 as running factories, traffic and electricity-generating, are producing a huge amount of pollutants when compared to the undeveloped
countries
.
Therefore
, it is reasonable to ask the problem makers, the developed
countries
, to take responsibility for global environmental
issues
.
Besides
, in order to handle the environmental
problems
, regulations and fundings are essential, which leads back to the wealthy governments to respond .
Although
 some of the regulations can stop the production of excessive pollutions due to human activities, rewarding systems, which require money, will be more effective. The public tends to accept rewarding systems than regulation as laws does not benefit them.
On the other hand
, solving the existing environmental
issues
 always costs billions of dollars,
such
 as the cost of collecting ocean garbage is over billions.
Also
, scientific research and innovations for these
problems
 require considerable funding in order to get to best result.
Hence
, solving
problems
 could not be accomplished without money, which undeveloped
countries
 don't have.
However
, the
third
 world
countries
 should
also
 bear a part of the responsibilities on global environmental
issues
,
such
 as education. Those government should educate their people
how
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 to conserve energy and resources.
Also
, the way they use in agriculture should
also
 be improved, as over-harvesting and wrong harvest methods would lead to different environmental
problems
, like deforestation. Undeveloped
nations
 can
also
 contribute to environmental
issues
. In conclusion, both rich and poor
nations
 should respond
for
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 the global environmental
issues
 where the wealthies' should contribute more effort than the poor. We are all sharing the same Earth,
hence
, why don't everyone takes responsibility for it?
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