Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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sport
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event
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national
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expenditure
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sports
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people
think that hosting an international Use synonyms
sports
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event
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country
, while some Use synonyms
people
think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Use synonyms
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