Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
According to some
people
hosting international sports
event
in their country
is good while other
argue on the same point by considering it is not appropriate for betterment of Correct pronoun usage
others
country
. In the following Add an article
the country
paragraphs
I will discuss Add a comma
,paragraphs
the
both views and will conclude by giving Remove the article
apply
opinion
.
Add an article
an opinion
Firstly
, hosting international sport
Change the noun form
sports
event
Fix the agreement mistake
events
in
Add a hyphen
in-country
country
can benefit someone's own Correct article usage
a country
country
because by conducting such
event
we show respect towards Fix the agreement mistake
events
other
Change the wording
another country
other countries
country
due to which cordial relations are maintained between any two countries and this
further
benefit own country
. For example
, if India organise
an Change the verb form
organises
event
for national
Correct article usage
the national
sport
of America, this
will fetch tourism as many people
who have keen
interest in Add an article
a keen
such
sport
will come to India to attend live
program and Add an article
the live
a live
this
will be boon
for Correct article usage
a boon
Indian
economy and Add an article
the Indian
moreover
our international relations will be one step up by Add a comma
,moreover
this
effort.
On the other hand
, people
who think that it is a bad idea are also
right to some extent because instead
of promoting international sports
or culture we should promote our own sports
. As there are many Indian games which
have been extinct due to their unpopularity among natives. Correct pronoun usage
that
Moreover
that expedenditure
which was to Correct your spelling
expenditure
invested
Change the verb
invest
on
hosting Change preposition
in
such
sports
event
can be used for benefit of own Fix the agreement mistake
events
country
by investing it
own infrastructure of Change the pronoun
its
sports
schools and other activities related to sports
.
But according to my opinion, hosting an event
related to other country
sport
is beneficial for other
Change the wording
another country
other countries
country
because it helps in number
of ways like spreading their own cultural values to other Change the article
a number
the number
country
and moreover
it will indirectly contribute to economy
of that Add an article
the economy
country
also
which is hosting such
event
.
To conclude i
would say that in the era of globalisation countries Change the capitalization
I
mantain
relations with each other and hosting Correct your spelling
maintain
such
event
will work as feather
in a cap and will make two countries bond more strong.Some Add an article
a feather
people
think that hosting an international sports
event
is good for the country
, while some people
think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
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